Its Ok, But Needs To Be Improved.
Here are my reasons for my ratings.
Graphics: I find that that graphics seem rushed, But They are great to watch in part.
Style: The style is Ok, I like the eyes :P but I don't like the way you animate.
Sound: The speech was a bit Crackly in parts, But it was easy to understand.
Violence: No real Violence, Chico was a bit Violent and Kicking that guy out the store was Violent but also funny.
Humor: Funny in parts, But some Jokes do seem a bit rushed.
Overall: Good attempt, And I do think this will get into the portal.
Things you should work on: For the next part of the series, I Think you should try to improve the graphics and the lipsync, Also get yourself a better microphone.
Hope this review helped you.