Good, But could be better.
I liked it but I definatly see room for improvement,
- Maybe draw the clocks alot better.
- Make it longer.
- Add a few more jokes.
- But overall it was funny and a good attempt.
Good, But could be better.
I liked it but I definatly see room for improvement,
- Maybe draw the clocks alot better.
- Make it longer.
- Add a few more jokes.
- But overall it was funny and a good attempt.
alright, cool. I'm working much harder on the next one. In the meantime, I suggest you watch my first submission, probably my best.
Pretty good.
I loved the graphics, I seriously didnt see good graphics coming.
Nice style also!
Sound was perfect and I liked the final music track :P
LMFAO Funny.
Overall Great and I may check out some more work by you.
oh yes, I'm sure you'll find my other works to be quite enjoyable and insightful, if I do say so my self. true testaments of my amazing skills.
That was rather Astonishing.
Great Lightshow, I enjoyed myself throughout.
Only critism is I don't like the trees, Lol.
But overall fantastic, and, Jeeze, That was awesome.
what dont you like about the trees.
the lack of lights? yeah i know i was in a rush when i did that. Oh well. Atleast thats the only thing. Thanks so much for the review and good luck with your stuff
and happy holidays
Is this a new birth...
A New birth of a Clay legend?
Great style and you haven't copied off Knox, You've created your own style!
I really like this, I must watch your other work (This is the first thing I've viewed from you).
Can't wait for more stuff to come out.
My only critisism is that the camera moves around quite confusingly.
But overall, Great!
The camera wouldn't stay still, and it's hard making a camera look like it's moving smoothly when you have to move the camera to take a picture.
Lololol, A Whole new meaning.
I thought that was pretty funny, Just the whole thought of a Pig.
And you bring a whole new meaning to "When pigs fly.."
I hope I can see more work from you soon and this was truely good.
I don't have any "Constructive Critism" for you though.
I couldn't find anything to Critisise.
" whole new meaning to 'When pigs fly..'"
Thats what i waws thinking when i first came up with it. THX XD
Awesome, And Quite Funny.
That was really good, And I just have to know what that opening music is, Anychance You can tell me?
thnx 4 the review man. and the usik is enya - may it be
Let's Fap To It, LOLOL
IM still laughing, And I Can't see through the tears of my eyes, Awesome!
Thanks! ;D
Its Ok, But Needs To Be Improved.
Here are my reasons for my ratings.
Graphics: I find that that graphics seem rushed, But They are great to watch in part.
Style: The style is Ok, I like the eyes :P but I don't like the way you animate.
Sound: The speech was a bit Crackly in parts, But it was easy to understand.
Violence: No real Violence, Chico was a bit Violent and Kicking that guy out the store was Violent but also funny.
Humor: Funny in parts, But some Jokes do seem a bit rushed.
Overall: Good attempt, And I do think this will get into the portal.
Things you should work on: For the next part of the series, I Think you should try to improve the graphics and the lipsync, Also get yourself a better microphone.
Hope this review helped you.
Thanks. It's nice to have some helpful critisism.
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Wales, UK
Joined on 3/29/06